For you...
For there is so much to tell,
I wonder how will it all gel.
I stare, keep staring at the wall,
Will it bear, keep bearing with all?
For there is so much to think,
I wonder, if it will push me over the brink,
Deep in sands of time,
What if I sink?
For there is so much to dream,
My life lies agleam.
Scrounging through the streets,
Restless, the heart beats.
For there is so much to do,
All forming a long queue,
I wonder, if we’ll see,
That we were meant to be!
Awesome!!! really loved it .. just thought can i steal it ??
ReplyDelete@Mihir
ReplyDeleteYou will...for what though?
Scary but Lovely feeling na. !? .. Dreaming.. :)
ReplyDeleteNicely jotted Niki .. :)
For there is so much to tell,
ReplyDeleteI wonder how it all will gel.
:P thats just saying how much you love to talk right?
@ 4lene
ReplyDeleteYup! Thanks a lot!
@ Raj
you always come up with a different perspective right? I like! :D And yeah, I always have a lot to say...
For there is so much to do,
ReplyDeleteAll forming a long queue...
bade log :P
oh yes you really have to have a lot to say. i know. i know. after all that comes with being a woman doesn't it? :P
and just in case i didn't say it already that poem wasn't really all that bad.
@ Raj
ReplyDeleteSaheb, bade toh aap hai! :p And Merci...I am glad think much of my poem!
:)
ReplyDeletesee i was wondering. you like to talk. i do too. serious. and you are online. and i am too.
whats next? :P
and the poem is good! okay fine its great! like really really great!
so if that's buttering enough, thodi gappe shappe ho jayen? :P
@ Raj
ReplyDeleteNow you come to the point ha! Okay add me on gmail! banerjee.nikita@gmail.com
what point? oh yes the one about your poem being good yes yes. it is fabulous.
ReplyDeleteloved it! :)
ReplyDeleteAnd yes, we were always meant to be! :)
@ Raj
ReplyDeleteThank you Raj Saheb! :P
@ Himanshu
Sigh...yes! :D Love you
Nice..I liked the repetitions, it just adds to the apprehensive-voice of the poem...
ReplyDeleteGreat rhymes too :)
Thanks for dropping by my place.
@ Erratic thoughts
ReplyDeleteThank you!
see tags like saheb dont go with my image. try whiskey.
ReplyDeleteloved it poetess!! too good!
ReplyDelete@ Raj
ReplyDeleteHehe okay Whiskey!
@ Sujata
Thanks! :D
Nice poem. The emotions are really strong and heartfelt. :)
ReplyDelete@ D2
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Loved it! The most difficult of things can be expressed with the simplest of words! Love the cute rhymes too :)
ReplyDeleteKudos!
@ Kevin
ReplyDeleteThank you! Keep visiting!