Confessions of the heart broken...
Is it time yet?
No. Wait.
Wait, for I have
Still to hold your hand.
To feel the warmth,
To connect to
My soul again.
My soul seethes
With desire.
A desire, so
Strong. To
Hold you close.
To smell the
Fragrance of your
Hair.
Of your face.
Your face, I cant
Get enough of it.
Those eyes burn my
Already parched desire.
A desire, so
Strong. To kiss you.
To quench my parched
Soul.
Wait. There is time yet!
Isn’t there? To sit
Close to you. To sit and stare
To hear you. To hold your
Hand in mine. Words bundle up
Inside of me. I can’t say.
Can you hear my heart beat?
My heart beats just for you.
Don’t go? There is time yet?
No? please?
Go then. Go only to
Come back to me.
And there will be time, yet again.
Hmmm, good effort.
ReplyDeleteNice short sentences....conveys quite a lots.
PS: The makeover looks good
@ Sujoy Bhattacharjee
ReplyDeleteThanks...
hmmm. A little provocative ...
ReplyDelete@ Human Observer
ReplyDeleteHow?
hmmmmmmmm, good a very good effort indeed......
ReplyDeletecheers to love!!!
@ Rashmi Yadav
ReplyDeleteThanks deary!
:'(
ReplyDelete@ Iggy
ReplyDeletemuahs...
There will be time...
ReplyDeleteWhy can that time come fast..
for all the good things????????
Loved it!
@ Himanshu
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Hmmm.. Very nice. Thats quite intense...
ReplyDeleteAnd a very honest piece of mind... :)
Liked it here, as always..
Ashen
@ AshenGlow
ReplyDeleteHello there! Thanks for dropping by again!
This is my favorite:
ReplyDelete'Go then. Go only to
Come back to me.'
Then parting really is a sweet sorrow.
@ Julia Smith
ReplyDelete//Bows?/ Thank you!
beautiful. very deep and intense.
ReplyDeletei have no words to describe it.
:)
@ Sumit
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Intense and heartfelt piece of expression!
ReplyDeleteGood job \m/...
@ Dr. Paranoid
ReplyDeleteThank you very much!
very nice...loved the look of your blog
ReplyDelete@ Raghav
ReplyDeleteThank you!
nice look ya...
ReplyDeletebtw deep lines...and very intense at places as well...
tc
my first visit -
ReplyDeleteread quite some, from the lohagarh travelogue, to the facts abt u aint getting time enuf to write, hating school.. et al; read abt the slept debt and that ur a good liar (lol!) was nice n easy reading thru the scribbles... ironic to the constructs they were representing..
who can say what is a good write? we write what we feel and maybe try to draw the perimeter of emotions.. i dunno.. confessions was a nice.. but why does it end on a note where 'you have to come back' to me.. go only to come back to me...? does it ever happen, maybe in poetic justice.. wish there were such powers though!
was nice reading the posts... in the maximum city, questions are never answered (is what i learnt)
@ d Gypsy
ReplyDeleteThank you! I like the new Ire too!
@ der Bergwind
I am glad that you liked what you read here!
And some questions are better off not answered!
@ Nikki 'Ire'...
ReplyDeletefully agree.. sometimes there are right answers, sometimes wrong... sometimes there are no answers at all; so its important to ask the right questions.. and leave it at that :)
i love this poem..going thru the exact phase right now..was super confused..i think this poem is a sign of what i should do..thanksa
ReplyDelete@ bugs.honey and some
ReplyDeleteHey! Thanks...but I cant see your blog! Why?
was in this weird phase so depression and deleted my blog..
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