That thing called...
Beautiful Twilight,
Stars bright, up-
above.
Luminescent clouds
cover the moon,
There, they have
been standing there,
long since noon.
Leaving imprints
on the sand, as
they walk.
Holding hands,
fingers entwined,
whispering sweet
nothings...
Is this a dream?
I hope not, if
it is, i wont
wake them!
Sigh! that
thing called
LOVE....
Stars bright, up-
above.
Luminescent clouds
cover the moon,
There, they have
been standing there,
long since noon.
Leaving imprints
on the sand, as
they walk.
Holding hands,
fingers entwined,
whispering sweet
nothings...
Is this a dream?
I hope not, if
it is, i wont
wake them!
Sigh! that
thing called
LOVE....
who is HE after all...who got u flummoxed and now this????????
ReplyDeleteI was expecting this one! :D
ReplyDeleteIt was time u wrote about it! ;) hehe
nicely written!
-I
:) nys...
ReplyDeletesounds like the ode to psyche where the poet doesnt want to wake up Cupid and Psyche entangled in love...
Beautiful...
thnx for droppin by!!!:)
Was submitting and my net connection bonked...dunno if my thot go in or not...
ReplyDelete:) will get back to check
nice lines...
ReplyDeletefound ur blog thru another's...nice place u got here :)
people have been complicating love so much that it was nice to see a poem which talks of love and the simple things it does to make life a lot better to live in.
ReplyDeletehey nice blog u have got....i m not poetic...still i admire people who write one....coz tats so difficult...lols..
ReplyDeleteGood one
ReplyDeleteMoment well captured. Liked the imagery.
Keep it rollin;)
hey!
ReplyDeleteI am sherry and I have started a picture deication thread an my blog
impressionist has dedicated a picture and a message to you at
http://sherryrowl.blogspot.com/2008/03/say-it-with-pictures.html
he is waiting for your reply
take care
Wonderful yaar:)
ReplyDeleteReminds me of Flying in a Blue Dream. :)
ReplyDeleteHeyy this post is wonderful and blog is fantastic.
ReplyDeleteTouche :)
ReplyDeletenice nice
ReplyDelete:) mmmmmm
Realization:
ReplyDeleteWe feel on the same lines...
Beautiful poem! :)
@Himanshu
ReplyDeleteBlah!
@impressionist
hehhe...you got tht right!
@d sinner
ummmm thanks
@maverick
thanks for stopping by!
@little boxes
i agree...but then simple things are complex!
@nirmal
thanx!
@scribbler
i appreciate that!
@saheefa
thanx
@trinity
:) thanx
@ananya
thanks for stopping!
@arunabh
:) :) :)
@standbymind
:) :) :)
@wildflower
sigh...how true!