Free...
I am searching for;
her.
She wasnt
in the mirror
this morning,
not at noon.
Did i loose her?
Is that a question?
Maybe, not sure.
Am not sure, if
I lost her in the
loo, maybe while
amongst the crowd
in the
train last night.
Where, oh where
could she be?
Of this, mundane life,
of "get-up-work-eat-sit-
work-run-train-blah"
must have frightened her
too, like me.
Oh then, if your gone
dont come back, not
soon at least. fly off
some place,
alone you are;
free!
her.
She wasnt
in the mirror
this morning,
not at noon.
Did i loose her?
Is that a question?
Maybe, not sure.
Am not sure, if
I lost her in the
loo, maybe while
amongst the crowd
in the
train last night.
Where, oh where
could she be?
Of this, mundane life,
of "get-up-work-eat-sit-
work-run-train-blah"
must have frightened her
too, like me.
Oh then, if your gone
dont come back, not
soon at least. fly off
some place,
alone you are;
free!
Sometimes, it's a good thing to be lost. I like this!!
ReplyDeleteits a good thing to lose urself once in a while! ;)
ReplyDeletehope u find her soon! :D
-I
wow, i especially like this part:
ReplyDelete"Of this, mundane life,
of "get-up-work-eat-sit-
work-run-train-blah"
must have frightened her
too, like me."
it makes me want to get off of my arse and start writing again.
Hmmm.. Interesting!
ReplyDeleteNice blog, you write well.
Happy Writing :)
Did you lose Disillusioned Me?
ReplyDelete@pat
ReplyDeleteI totally agree..! Thanks
@impressionist
she flew out of the window actually! lolz
@Jelenena
hey thanks for stopping by!
@rohit
Thanks
@julia
Umm maybe, for the worse though...found the cynic!
Sometimes it does help to lose ourselves and be a bit alone in this busy world, which do helps in settling down and re-analyse everything and once again get back to rhythm....lovely lines...you have crafted it very nicely!
ReplyDeleteYeah..
ReplyDeletelet her go..
let her roam
n be free!
Just 2 words - 'free'ly flowing :)
ReplyDelete@flyingstars
ReplyDeletethanks a lot!
@standby
where have you been ha?
@arunabh
thanx for stopping by!
its d best thing u cud do for urself... i liked dis!! :) :)
ReplyDeletecheers!
hehe lose her in the loo. :)
ReplyDeletewho doesnt wish to run away to be free from this monotonous circus everyday?
ReplyDeletenice poem :)