Saturday, 30 July 2011

Anger

(Picture from the web is only for representation purposes only. Copyright lies with the artist.)

Wrought, with fear,
Taut lines, drawn near,
Cramped, feelings sear,
I feel caged.

Gossamer wings clipped,
Walls of Sanctum, chipped,
My dignity, stripped,
I feel maligned.

Now I lie in wake,
For reaper's sake,
Dressed in morose gear,
I await death.

26 comments:

R. Ramesh said...

baapree...kya nikki..itna serious..:)

Nikita Banerjee said...

@ R.Ramesh

:)Yes. Been feeling so for a while.

R. Ramesh said...

hey buddy...cheer up yar..am sure u r joking..

Sneha said...

Hello Nikita, I've seen you've changed your blog template to black and seem upset... the poem does not give me positive vibes either... If it is the marriage hangover, I'm sure it'll set in after a while... If there's anything you want to share, feel free to write to me.
Regards. God Bless.

Nikita Banerjee said...

@ Sneha

Thanks! :) I am okay now but surely reconnect with you once I am back to Mumbai in Mid August. How you doing?

Julia Smith said...

Walls of Sanctum, chipped

I like that line.

Nikita Banerjee said...

@ Julia

Thanks!

Rena said...

I share the same views. Liked your blog very much.

S said...

I'm fine, Nikita... Relationships do that to you, you know...Once while doing John Berryman's poems, our lit prof. mentioned it in class - relationships are soul cause of trouble!

Nikita Banerjee said...

@ S

Haha totally agree. Sometimes I wish we were granted the authority to choose our relatives as well. :)

Manpreet Bedi said...

Deep, very very very deep, but i will say "this too shall pass." :-)

Nikita Banerjee said...

@ Manpreet Bedi

:) Thank you.

Erratic Thoughts said...

Intense and nicely done...
Life goes on,isn't it?:)

R. Ramesh said...

manpreet said it well..nikki..u r a wonderful person...keep the cheers..

Nikita Banerjee said...

@ Erratic Thoughts

Thank you!

@ R. Ramesh

I have a wonderful friend in you as well! :)

tahera said...

woah Nikita!! Thats some very serious stuff!! Hope everythings well...relations are difficult, but a bit of understanding goes a long way.

Adee said...

very nice!
i can feel the pain!!!
though i don't understand the reason for this. hope all is well with u.

Nikita Banerjee said...

@Tahera

Thanks a lot!

@ Adee

This was just an expression of anger. Momentary. I am okay now :)

R. Ramesh said...

hey buddy:)

pure said...

nice use of words
and the rhyme

incidentally, have you seen 'the tree of life'

it's kinda related. or so, i think.

Nikita Banerjee said...

@ R. Ramesh

Hello there!

@ Pure

Thank you! No, I have not seen the Tree of Life. Will look it up.

R. Ramesh said...

nikkiii...just to say v r always with u...will catch up for ssure..god knows when..y not u and h travel to dubai to take a break..

sharplittlepencil said...

Nikita, this was deadly serious and haunting. My first reading of your poetry, and I'm very impressed by the depth of feeling expressed here. Sure, it's dark, but without darkness, we would not appreciate the light. Great write. Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/08/10/i-heard-the-news-today-oh-boy/

Nikita Banerjee said...

@ Sharplittlepencil

Thank you Amy! :)

surabhi said...

How did i miss this one!!

Nikita Banerjee said...

@ Surabhi

How did you? Lol. Hope you liked it!

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