Sunday, 15 March 2009

Confessions of the heart broken...

Is it time yet?

No. Wait.

Wait, for I have 

Still to hold your hand.

 

To feel the warmth,

To connect to

My soul again.

My soul seethes

With desire.

 

A desire, so

Strong.  To

Hold you close.

To smell the

Fragrance of your

Hair.


 To touch the skin

Of your face.

Your face, I cant

Get enough of it.

Those eyes burn my

Already parched desire.


 

A desire, so

Strong. To kiss you.

To quench my parched

Soul.

 

Wait. There is time yet!

Isn’t there? To sit

Close to you. To sit and stare

To hear you. To hold your

Hand in mine. Words bundle up

Inside of me. I can’t say.



Can you hear my heart beat?

My heart beats just for you.

Don’t go? There is time yet?

No? please?

 

Go then. Go only to

Come back to me. 

And there will be time, yet again.


27 comments:

Sujoy Bhattacharjee said...

Hmmm, good effort.
Nice short sentences....conveys quite a lots.


PS: The makeover looks good

Nikki said...

@ Sujoy Bhattacharjee

Thanks...

humanobserver said...

hmmm. A little provocative ...

Nikki said...

@ Human Observer

How?

Rashmi Yadav said...

hmmmmmmmm, good a very good effort indeed......
cheers to love!!!

Nikki said...

@ Rashmi Yadav

Thanks deary!

iggy said...

:'(

Nikki said...

@ Iggy

muahs...

Himanshu said...

There will be time...
Why can that time come fast..
for all the good things????????

Loved it!

Nikki said...

@ Himanshu

:)

AshenGlow said...

Hmmm.. Very nice. Thats quite intense...

And a very honest piece of mind... :)

Liked it here, as always..
Ashen

Nikki said...

@ AshenGlow

Hello there! Thanks for dropping by again!

Julia Smith said...

This is my favorite:

'Go then. Go only to
Come back to me.'

Then parting really is a sweet sorrow.

Nikki said...

@ Julia Smith

//Bows?/ Thank you!

sumit said...

beautiful. very deep and intense.
i have no words to describe it.

:)

Nikki said...

@ Sumit

Thank you!

Dr.Paranoid said...

Intense and heartfelt piece of expression!
Good job \m/...

Nikki said...

@ Dr. Paranoid

Thank you very much!

Raghav said...

very nice...loved the look of your blog

Nikki said...

@ Raghav

Thank you!

d gypsy! said...

nice look ya...

btw deep lines...and very intense at places as well...

tc

der Bergwind said...

my first visit -

read quite some, from the lohagarh travelogue, to the facts abt u aint getting time enuf to write, hating school.. et al; read abt the slept debt and that ur a good liar (lol!) was nice n easy reading thru the scribbles... ironic to the constructs they were representing..

who can say what is a good write? we write what we feel and maybe try to draw the perimeter of emotions.. i dunno.. confessions was a nice.. but why does it end on a note where 'you have to come back' to me.. go only to come back to me...? does it ever happen, maybe in poetic justice.. wish there were such powers though!

was nice reading the posts... in the maximum city, questions are never answered (is what i learnt)

Nikki said...

@ d Gypsy

Thank you! I like the new Ire too!

@ der Bergwind

I am glad that you liked what you read here!

And some questions are better off not answered!

der Bergwind said...

@ Nikki 'Ire'...
fully agree.. sometimes there are right answers, sometimes wrong... sometimes there are no answers at all; so its important to ask the right questions.. and leave it at that :)

bugs.honey and some said...

i love this poem..going thru the exact phase right now..was super confused..i think this poem is a sign of what i should do..thanksa

Nikki said...

@ bugs.honey and some

Hey! Thanks...but I cant see your blog! Why?

aditi said...

was in this weird phase so depression and deleted my blog..

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