Monday, 31 March 2008

That thing called...

Beautiful Twilight,
Stars bright, up-
above.
Luminescent clouds
cover the moon,
There, they have
been standing there,
long since noon.
Leaving imprints
on the sand, as
they walk.

Holding hands,
fingers entwined,
whispering sweet
nothings...

Is this a dream?
I hope not, if
it is, i wont
wake them!

Sigh! that
thing called
LOVE....

16 comments:

Himanshu said...

who is HE after all...who got u flummoxed and now this????????

Impressionist said...

I was expecting this one! :D
It was time u wrote about it! ;) hehe

nicely written!

-I

d SINNER!!! said...

:) nys...

sounds like the ode to psyche where the poet doesnt want to wake up Cupid and Psyche entangled in love...

Beautiful...

thnx for droppin by!!!:)

d SINNER!!! said...

Was submitting and my net connection bonked...dunno if my thot go in or not...

:) will get back to check

maverick said...

nice lines...

found ur blog thru another's...nice place u got here :)

little boxes said...

people have been complicating love so much that it was nice to see a poem which talks of love and the simple things it does to make life a lot better to live in.

Nirmal's Blog said...

hey nice blog u have got....i m not poetic...still i admire people who write one....coz tats so difficult...lols..

Scribbler said...

Good one

Moment well captured. Liked the imagery.


Keep it rollin;)

freesherry said...

hey!
I am sherry and I have started a picture deication thread an my blog

impressionist has dedicated a picture and a message to you at
http://sherryrowl.blogspot.com/2008/03/say-it-with-pictures.html

he is waiting for your reply
take care

Sahefa said...

Wonderful yaar:)

Trinity said...

Reminds me of Flying in a Blue Dream. :)

Ananya said...

Heyy this post is wonderful and blog is fantastic.

arunabh said...

Touche :)

Standbymind said...

nice nice
:) mmmmmm

wildflower said...

Realization:

We feel on the same lines...

Beautiful poem! :)

tHe_NeW_cYnIc said...

@Himanshu
Blah!

@impressionist
hehhe...you got tht right!

@d sinner
ummmm thanks

@maverick
thanks for stopping by!

@little boxes
i agree...but then simple things are complex!

@nirmal
thanx!

@scribbler
i appreciate that!

@saheefa
thanx

@trinity
:) thanx

@ananya
thanks for stopping!

@arunabh
:) :) :)

@standbymind
:) :) :)

@wildflower
sigh...how true!

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