Monday, 31 March 2008

That thing called...

Beautiful Twilight,
Stars bright, up-
Luminescent clouds
cover the moon,
There, they have
been standing there,
long since noon.
Leaving imprints
on the sand, as
they walk.

Holding hands,
fingers entwined,
whispering sweet

Is this a dream?
I hope not, if
it is, i wont
wake them!

Sigh! that
thing called


Himanshu said...

who is HE after all...who got u flummoxed and now this????????

Impressionist said...

I was expecting this one! :D
It was time u wrote about it! ;) hehe

nicely written!


d SINNER!!! said...

:) nys...

sounds like the ode to psyche where the poet doesnt want to wake up Cupid and Psyche entangled in love...


thnx for droppin by!!!:)

d SINNER!!! said...

Was submitting and my net connection bonked...dunno if my thot go in or not...

:) will get back to check

maverick said...

nice lines...

found ur blog thru another's...nice place u got here :)

little boxes said...

people have been complicating love so much that it was nice to see a poem which talks of love and the simple things it does to make life a lot better to live in.

Nirmal's Blog said...

hey nice blog u have got....i m not poetic...still i admire people who write one....coz tats so difficult...lols..

Scribbler said...

Good one

Moment well captured. Liked the imagery.

Keep it rollin;)

freesherry said...

I am sherry and I have started a picture deication thread an my blog

impressionist has dedicated a picture and a message to you at

he is waiting for your reply
take care

Sahefa said...

Wonderful yaar:)

Trinity said...

Reminds me of Flying in a Blue Dream. :)

Ananya said...

Heyy this post is wonderful and blog is fantastic.

arunabh said...

Touche :)

Standbymind said...

nice nice
:) mmmmmm

wildflower said...


We feel on the same lines...

Beautiful poem! :)

tHe_NeW_cYnIc said...


@impressionist got tht right!

@d sinner
ummmm thanks

thanks for stopping by!

@little boxes
i agree...but then simple things are complex!


i appreciate that!


:) thanx

thanks for stopping!

:) :) :)

:) :) :)

@wildflower true!


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