Friday, 8 June 2007

In the looking glass

In the looking glass

She is alone.
moon beams stream
into the room.
At first there are only
the silehoutes
and then closer; the
dried tears
streaked her face
gaunt,sunken
cheeks,pale skin
fading dreams
slowly smiles,
a tear rolls down
would you?
be.....
would you be
there,
tomorrow moon beam?

5 comments:

Sonu said...

Beautifully written..
Hats off and a standin ovation for niki.. her first serious n profound post..
Lookin forward for more of them..

Anonymous said...

I'm not sure about the moon beam..But i'm convinced that Niki's words beam is there to take care of the dried tears............

Ps- Dreams never fade...So dream big.....lolzzzzzzzzzzz
- i R O N Y

julia said...

"fading dreams
slowly smiles,
a tear rolls down
would you?
be.....
would you be
there,
tomorrow moon beam?"

Wonderful ending. I love how the narrator can't ask the question at first, then gathers up the strength and makes plans with the moon.

jail diet said...

don't cry!

i love the moon bean part!

Sonu said...

Update!! Update!! Update!!

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