In the looking glass

In the looking glass

She is alone.
moon beams stream
into the room.
At first there are only
the silehoutes
and then closer; the
dried tears
streaked her face
gaunt,sunken
cheeks,pale skin
fading dreams
slowly smiles,
a tear rolls down
would you?
be.....
would you be
there,
tomorrow moon beam?

Comments

  1. Beautifully written..
    Hats off and a standin ovation for niki.. her first serious n profound post..
    Lookin forward for more of them..

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  2. I'm not sure about the moon beam..But i'm convinced that Niki's words beam is there to take care of the dried tears............

    Ps- Dreams never fade...So dream big.....lolzzzzzzzzzzz
    - i R O N Y

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  3. "fading dreams
    slowly smiles,
    a tear rolls down
    would you?
    be.....
    would you be
    there,
    tomorrow moon beam?"

    Wonderful ending. I love how the narrator can't ask the question at first, then gathers up the strength and makes plans with the moon.

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  4. don't cry!

    i love the moon bean part!

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  5. Update!! Update!! Update!!

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